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  • #16160
    bond70
    Participant

    Bonjour à tous,

    Serait-il possible qu’une âme charitable puisse jeter un coup d’œil à mon CV mis au format australien ?

    En effet, j’aimerais partir en stage en Australie pour 5 mois et il faut absolument un CV correctement rédigé.

    Merci à vous !!!


    Hello,

    I’m French.

    Would it be possible to correct my Australian resume ?
    In fact, I’m going to do an internship (of 5 months) in Australia for my training.

    If there are misunderstandings, do not hesitate to ask me!

    THANK YOU VERY MUCH !!!



    SURNAME NAME

    Intership period: From September 2011 to January 2012

    Mobile: *********** Adress : ***********
    Visa: ???
    Nationality: French

    CAREER OBJECTIVE

    To apply my extensive experience in information technology and business development to improve the efficiency and the effectiveness of the company’s promotion and its services.

    INTERNSHIP EXPERIENCE

    22 November 2010 to 28 January 2011 – ESDI Infoservices – Belfort, 90000, France
    [SALES ENGINEER]

    ESDI Infoservices is a company of 220 people specialized in externalization of computer services (cloud computing, service desk, virtualization) and externalization of customer services (hot line, after sales services, support). The company has an annual turnover of approximately €13 billion.

    KEY RESPONSABILITIES:

    • Promote the company to new prospects in the east of France (maximum 500km)
    • Find new clients in medium-sized companies (minimum of 100 people)
    • Presentation of all range of company’s services
    • Conduct directs talks with IT managers of these companies
    • Implement all sales strategy (marketing study, telemarketing, mailing, emailing, prospects’s identification, promotion stand, face-to-face appointments)
    • Quickly integration in the current sales team of 6 person

    KEY ACHIEVEMENTS:

    • Obtention of 20 presentation’s appointments with unknown prospects
    • Size of company met : 100 to 800 people (average : 226 people)
    • Kilometers traveled : 4000km



    5 April 2010 to 30 June 2010 – SET (Systems and Transport Laboratory) in ERCOS (Ergonomics and Systems Design) research team – Montbéliard, 25000, France
    [COMPUTER PROGRAMMER]

    The research activity of the team ERCOS aims of ergonomics intervention in the design of products and systems applied to the transport’s field. The researchers in the ERCOS team are also teachers at UTBM (University of Technology in Belfort-Montbéliard). Research professors of the ERCOS team needed a management program for the curriculum of their students.

    KEY RESPONSABILITIES:

    • Create a XHTML/PHP program to manage each student
    • Create a MySQL database
    • Display photos, training, notes and ranking for each student
    • Display statistics: number of students, number of male and female…
    • Create an ergonomic web interface
    • Create personnal users accounts

    KEY ACHIEVEMENTS:

    • The program is now actively used by research professors
    • The use of Microsoft Excel files or paper’s workbook has been abandoned
    • The managing of students is much faster
    • Research professors has more time to devote to research

    LANGUAGES

    French: Mother Tongue
    English: Good knowledge
    German: Good knowledge
    Spanish: Beginner

    COMPUTER SKILLS

    Operating Systems:
    Linux (all versions) and Microsoft Windows (all versions)

    Software / Applications:
    Microsoft Office all versions (Word, Excel, Powerpoint, Access, Frontpage, Outlook, Outlook Express), Open Office, Adobe (Photoshop, Dreamweaver), Pinnacle Studio, Eclipse, Idea intellij…

    Languages and Scripts:
    PHP, MySQL, XHTML, CSS, Javascript, Ajax, C, C++, QT4, Java (Oriented-Object Programming), UML, Python, Latex, Prolog, Android.

    Other computer skills:
    Algoritmic, database administration, system architecture, network architecture

    Certifications:
    – ECDL / ICDL

    SALES SKILLS

    – Marketing
    – Accounting
    – Commercial communication
    – Sales technique

    ENGINEER SKILLS

    – Mechanics
    – Fluid mechanics

    PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE

    1 July 2010 to 30 August 2010 – SET (Systems and Transport Laboratory) in ERCOS (Ergonomics and Systems Design) research team – Montbéliard, 25000, France
    [COMPUTER PROGRAMMER/DATABASE ADMINISTRATOR]

    After the creation of the student management program during my intership, the ERCOS team hired me to complete and manage the new database.

    KEY RESPONSABILITIES:

    • Enter information in the database (student name, surname, notes, training…)
    • Manage the database (update, deletion…)
    • Train users to use my program

    OTHER WORK EXPERIENCE

    July 2004 – Restaurant “Le Louisiane”, 90000, Andelnans, France
    Dishwasher/Waiter
    Summer jobs (2005, 2006, 2007, 2008,2009) :
    Computer maintenance and auto mechanic at particular

    EDUCATION

    2010-2013:Masters of Science in Business International Development (Bachelor Degree)
    ESTA (School of Business Engineering), Belfort, 90000, France
    2008-2010: Advanced Diploma in Information Technology (Computer programming)
    IUT Informatique, Belfort, 90000, France
    2006‐2008: Senior Secondary Certificate of Education (Maths, Physics and Chemistry)
    Lycée Louis Aragon, Héricourt, 70400, France

    ACTIVITIES AND INTERESTS

    Sports (in club):
    Judo (8 years), Horse-riding (6 years), Ping-Pong (5 years), Rifle shooting (2 years)
    Other sports:
    Volleyball, Soccer, Mountain bike, Running, Skiing, Snowboarding, Bodyboarding
    Interests:
    Mechanical, computer, cinema, reading, model-making, travelling

    Full driving license

    #124002
    Toothbrush Nomads
    Participant
    bond70 wrote:
    Hello,

    I’m French.

    Would it be possible to correct my Australian resume ?
    In fact, I’m going to do an internship (of 5 months) in Australia for my training.

    If there are misunderstandings, do not hesitate to ask me!

    THANK YOU VERY MUCH !!!

    Je vais supposer que tu as conscience d’être sur un forum français, puisque tu t’y es inscrit.
    Plus délicat, je vais supposer que cette demande est rédigée en anglais car il s’agit d’un copier/coller d’un message que tu as dû publier ailleurs.
    Partant alors du postulat que tu étais trop paresseux pour la ré-écrire en français, j’émettrai l’hypothèse d’un sujet de dissertation : devrions-nous réellement être moins paresseux et prendre le temps de corriger ce CV pour toi ?

    #124003
    bond70
    Participant

    Slt,

    Non j’ai juste pensé qu’une personne étant capable de lire la consigne en anglais devrait être à même de corriger le CV qui est lui aussi en anglais.

    Ce n’est pas de la paraisse…ce serait vraiment inquiétant car le français est ma langue maternelle ^^

    J’ai donc rajouté la consigne en français puisque cela peut-être dérangeant 😉

    Merci à vous!!

    #124004
    mrngorickets
    Membre

    Hi,

    Thanks very much for this comment. It help me to think about my ideals.

    Tks again and pls keep posting.

    If you want to get more materials that related to this topic, you can visit: Career objectives

    Best regards.

    #124005
    Anonyme
    Inactif

    Hello, voici quelques suggestions que je te propose – les corrections sont en gras :
    Good luck!

    My application is motivated by my extensive experience in information technology and business development in improving the efficiency and the effectiveness of the company’s promotion and services.
    INTERNSHIP EXPERIENCE

    22 November 2010 to 28 January 2011 – ESDI Infoservices – Belfort, 90000, France
    [SALES ENGINEER]

    ESDI Infoservices is a company of 220 people specialized in externalization of computer services (cloud computing, service desk, virtualization) and externalization of customer services (hot line, after sales services, support). The company has an annual turnover of approximately €13 billion.

    KEY RESPONSABILITIES:

    To promote the company with new prospects in the eastern region of France (maximum 500km);
    To find new clients within medium-sized companies (minimum of 100 people);
    To present all the range of the company’s services;
    To conduct directs talks with these companies’ IT managers;
    To implement all sales strategy (marketing study, telemarketing, mailing, emailing, prospects’s identification, promotion stand, face-to-face appointments);
    Quick integration within the current sales team of 6 persons. or To quickly integrating the current sales team of 6 persons.

    KEY ACHIEVEMENTS:

    in getting 20 appointments for a presentation to unknown prospects;
    in reaching the company size aimed: 100 to 800 people (average : 226 people);
    in travelling: 4,000 kilometres.



    5 April 2010 to 30 June 2010 – SET (Systems and Transport Laboratory) in ERCOS (Ergonomics and Systems Design) research team – Montbéliard, 25000, France
    [COMPUTER PROGRAMMER]

    The research activity of the team ERCOS aims of ergonomics intervention in the design of products and systems applied to the transport’s field. The researchers of the ERCOS team are also teachers at UTBM (University of Technology in Belfort-Montbéliard). Research professors of the ERCOS team needed a management program for the curriculum of their students.

    KEY RESPONSABILITIES:

    To create a XHTML/PHP program in order to manage each student;
    To create a MySQL database;
    To display photos, training, notes and ranking for each student;
    To display statistics: number of students, number of male and female…;
    To create an ergonomic web interface;
    To create personnal users accounts.

    KEY ACHIEVEMENTS:

    The program is now actively used by research professors;
    The use of Microsoft Excel files or paper’s workbook has been given up;
    The management of the students is much faster;
    The Research professors have more time to devote to research.

    LANGUAGES

    French: Mother Tongue
    English: Good knowledge
    German: Good knowledge
    Spanish: Beginner

    COMPUTER SKILLS

    Operating Systems:
    Linux (all versions) and Microsoft Windows (all versions)

    Software / Applications:
    Microsoft Office all versions (Word, Excel, Powerpoint, Access, Frontpage, Outlook, Outlook Express), Open Office, Adobe (Photoshop, Dreamweaver), Pinnacle Studio, Eclipse, Idea intellij…

    Languages and Scripts:
    PHP, MySQL, XHTML, CSS, Javascript, Ajax, C, C++, QT4, Java (Oriented-Object Programming), UML, Python, Latex, Prolog, Android.

    Other computer skills:
    Algorithmic, database administration, system architecture, network architecture

    Certifications:
    – ECDL / ICDL

    SALES SKILLS

    – Marketing
    – Accounting
    – Commercial communication
    – Sales technique

    ENGINEER SKILLS

    – Mechanics
    – Fluid mechanics

    PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE

    1 July 2010 to 30 August 2010 – SET (Systems and Transport Laboratory) in ERCOS (Ergonomics and Systems Design) research team – Montbéliard, 25000, France
    [COMPUTER PROGRAMMER/DATABASE ADMINISTRATOR]

    After the management program I created during my intership, I was hired by the ERCOS team in order to complete and manage their new database.
    KEY RESPONSABILITIES:

    To enter information into the database (student name, surname, scores, training…);
    To manage the database (update, deletion…);
    To teach users how to use my program.

    OTHER WORK EXPERIENCE

    July 2004 – Restaurant “Le Louisiane”, 90000, Andelnans, France
    Dishwasher/Waiter
    Summer jobs (2005, 2006, 2007, 2008,2009) :
    Computer maintenance and auto mechanic in particular.

    EDUCATION

    2010-2013:Masters of Science in Business International Development (Bachelor Degree)
    ESTA (School of Business Engineering), Belfort, 90000, France
    2008-2010: Advanced Diploma in Information Technology (Computer programming)
    IUT Informatique, Belfort, 90000, France
    2006‐2008: Senior Secondary Certificate of Education (Maths, Physics and Chemistry)
    Lycée Louis Aragon, Héricourt, 70400, France

    ACTIVITIES AND INTERESTS

    Sports (in club):
    Judo (8 years), Horse-riding (6 years), Ping-Pong (5 years), Rifle shooting (2 years)
    Other sports:
    Volleyball, Soccer, Mountain bike, Running, Skiing, Snowboarding, Bodyboarding
    Interests:
    Mechanical, computer, cinema, reading, model-making, travelling

    Full driving license

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